well i decided to just use samples xD
I was all geared up to give my comments on your composition 
Youâre sure youâre happy to remove this? 
well i found a way to compose my melodies and bass lines with samples, i cut them up into individual bits and use it like that. it sounded so much better that i discarded play function for now xD
but i am still open to ur feedback 
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(Iâve taken the liberty of bringing back the original title of this topic, because I think itâs still worth it 
- even if @holz has decided on a different approach for now 
)
So, for the benefit of others who may like to also give feedback:
here was the original code you were interested in having feedback on:
eins = (ring :cs3, :cs3,:e3,:fs3)
zwei = (ring :cs4, :e4,:fs4, :fs4,:fs4, :gs4, :a4, :cs4)
live_loop :met do
sleep 1
end
use_synth :mod_fm
live_loop :möp, sync: :met do
use_bpm 90
use_random_seed 23123
# use_synth :mod_tri
3.times do
6.times do
# with_swing 0.100, pulse: 8 do
use_synth :supersaw
use_synth_defaults res: 0.25
play eins.choose, attack: 0.1 , release: 0.1, sustain: 0.1 if spread(8, 9).tick(:as)
# end
sleep (ring 0.25, 0.25, 0.5, 0.25, 0.25, 0.5, 0.5).tick(:aass)
end
end
4.times do
use_synth :supersaw
use_synth_defaults res: 0.25
play zwei.choose, amp: 0.74, attack: 0.1 , release: 0.1, sustain: 0.1 if spread(8, 9).tick(:asass)
sleep (ring 0.25, 0.25, 0.25, 0.5, 0.25, 0.25).tick(:aasgfss)
end
end
eins1 = (ring :cs2, :cs2,:e2,:fs2)
zwei2 = (ring :cs3, :e3,:fs3, :fs3,:fs3, :gs3, :a3, :cs3)
use_synth :mod_fm
live_loop :möp1 do
sync :met
use_bpm 90
use_random_seed 2211232333123
# use_synth :mod_tri
20.times do
3.times do
# with_swing 0.100, pulse: 8 do
use_synth :chipbass
use_synth_defaults res: 0.99
play eins1.choose, attack: 0.1 , amp: 1.5, release: 0.1, sustain: 0.1 if spread(8, 9).tick(:as)
# end
sleep (ring 0.125, 0.125, 0.5, 0.125, 0.125, 0.5).tick(:aass)
end
end
4.times do
use_synth :chipbass
use_synth_defaults res: 0.99
play zwei2.choose, amp: 0.74, attack: 0.1 , amp: 1.5, release: 0.1, sustain: 0.1 if spread(8, 9).tick(:asass)
sleep (ring 0.125, 0.125, 0.5, 0.125, 0.125, 0.5).tick(:aasgfss)
end
end
And your original question:
do u think this has enough potential to be played in front of people? i mean imagine a drum etc ^^
oh and i mean just the melodie and rythm not the actual sound xD
My comments:
Firstly - music appreciation is by nature a very subjective beast - so no doubt it depends much on the kind of people you might be performing it for 
Secondly, therefore, any comments or constructive criticism are also subjective
Back to the point though:
Do I think this has enough potential to be played in front of people? sure 
Do I think the melody and rhythm are fine, even if the actual timbre/sound/instruments are not final? sure
(You mention that you found a way to compose this with samples - great! thatâs just as valid as a pure synthesis approach Would love to check out a soundcloud recording if you feel comfortable sharing )
And to continue with my (probably still vague) feedback - regarding potential for live performance of this piece, it all depends on the final form you may have in mind, and how that might fit with the potential target audience/venue! Would the above code would be one section/just the basis of a larger piece? If your plan would be to extend this beyond the melody and rhythm included here, there are obviously a multitude of ways to do it. There are really no ârightâ or âwrongâ ways when it comes to composing. If something sounds good to you, thatâs the first step! If you can work out that enough people might enjoy listening to it in a live performance, even better! (Even if youâre having trouble figuring that out, it doesnât necessarily mean they donât exist - the world is a big place, it might just mean you havenât found them yet )
Apologies if my ramblings donât help you very much 
was there anything more specific you might have been after?
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Thanks for ur opinion, feedback is always good, .
really enjoy the potential of it, but as i tried the sample solution i fell in love with it, here is a short snipped i recorded.
Melodie and Bass von M. E. (soundcloud.com)
i am changing the bass live and changing the random seed of the melodie
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@holz both of these sound good to me. Echoing @Eliâs point, these are elements, and itâs about how they fit into a bigger performance.
If itâs any broader question like, âAm I ready to perform this?â my advice is sooner rather than later. Thereâs a load of stuff about performing which isnât about the focus on the composition and the tech, which you only work out by doing it. Not saying donât prepare. Do prepare, just donât try to wait for âeverything perfectâ before heading out.
And sorry if I read too much into the question 
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Ehehehe. I donât see @eli commenting anywhere here @soxsa 
(I would love to see if he has any feedback too though - heâs always interested in music appreciation and sharing here just as much as all the technical discussions that go on 
)
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Thnaks for ur kind words, they are like a warm shower 
i am confident to perform with the sample solution (itÂŽs just an example how i would go about those elements of a track), i just need to get some practice in and add drums and drones ect.
i am planing to busk on the street
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Whoops - how to gain friends and influence people, sorry. I did know it was you
Excellent. I like that as you can call the shots. There are other places to start, some can be a baptism of fire
All good, I was just being cheeky
@holz - I agree with Soxsa, theyâre both good! and busking, good on you. Iâve thought on and off about having a go myself at some point - itâs been easier to take part in things like a local monthly experimental music meeting though
Ahhh⊠but how do you know for sure @eli didnât post, eh?
Maybe @ethan_being_cheeky is just @eli in disguise, eh?
Or maybe not! 
Regards,
Are_you_sure_Iâm_really_Eli?
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As the saying goes: On the internet nobody knows youâre a dog .
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Aaagh my poor head. Itâs hard enough to try to work out how to network these synths - let alone this!