# Refresh〔Kōshin | 更新〕My first fully finished song! **URL:** \ **Category:** Performances, Streams & Live Coding\ **Created:** [April 27, 2018, 9:16am UTC](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/t/refresh-koshin-my-first-fully-finished-song/1041 "2018-04-27T09:16:09Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 6\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![bagofdragonite](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/flex017/user_avatar/in-thread.sonic-pi.net/bagofdragonite/32/2049_2.png) [@bagofdragonite](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/u/bagofdragonite)\ **Post date:** [April 27, 2018, 9:16am UTC](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/t/refresh-koshin-my-first-fully-finished-song/1041/1 "2018-04-27T09:16:09Z")
Here’s that song I was working on finally complete. I played around with bass and synth like I said I would but in the end it sounded best without so I spent my time polishing, compressing and limiting the track. I also drew up some art to go along with the song. I will continue working in this style and see if I can get a small album going. https://w.soundcloud.com/player/?visual=false&url=https%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F435904848&show_artwork=true&maxheight=166 ---
**Author:** ![Mike](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/flex017/user_avatar/in-thread.sonic-pi.net/mike/32/556_2.png) [@Mike](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/u/Mike)\ **Post date:** [April 27, 2018, 5:19pm UTC](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/t/refresh-koshin-my-first-fully-finished-song/1041/2 "2018-04-27T17:19:58Z")
I like it! Repeating the 5-note descending motif at the beginning of sections makes the work feel unified. ---
**Author:** ![mrbombmusic](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/flex017/user_avatar/in-thread.sonic-pi.net/mrbombmusic/32/2282_2.png) [@mrbombmusic](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/u/mrbombmusic)\ **Post date:** [April 28, 2018, 2:14am UTC](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/t/refresh-koshin-my-first-fully-finished-song/1041/3 "2018-04-28T02:14:09Z")
This is great. I can hear @kniknoo 's trap drum function in there! ---
**Author:** ![bagofdragonite](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/flex017/user_avatar/in-thread.sonic-pi.net/bagofdragonite/32/2049_2.png) [@bagofdragonite](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/u/bagofdragonite)\ **Post date:** [April 28, 2018, 5:09am UTC](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/t/refresh-koshin-my-first-fully-finished-song/1041/4 "2018-04-28T05:09:23Z")
Yeah that’s a really useful function! ---
**Author:** ![Eli](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/flex017/user_avatar/in-thread.sonic-pi.net/eli/32/116_2.png) [@Eli](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/u/Eli)\ **Post date:** [April 28, 2018, 3:08pm UTC](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/t/refresh-koshin-my-first-fully-finished-song/1041/5 "2018-04-28T15:08:12Z")
I’m probably making a terrible faux-pas by doing this… no doubt trap artists all over the world will curse me… but if you replace the single trap line with: trap\_hats(:drum\_cymbal\_hard, [1, 2, 3, 4].choose, rrand(0.7, 1.3), rrand(0.7, 1.3)) trap\_hats(:drum\_cymbal\_closed, [6, 8, 12, 16].choose, rrand(0.7, 1.3), rrand(0.7, 1.3)) I think it’s okay, even if the rest of the trap world doesn’t… but then, what do I know. [https://www.dropbox.com/s/x3dv4efm41k97bj/anti-trap.wav?dl=1](https://www.dropbox.com/s/x3dv4efm41k97bj/anti-trap.wav?dl=1) Eli… (Heh… and lets not even talk about cowbell and chime… ) 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![bagofdragonite](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/flex017/user_avatar/in-thread.sonic-pi.net/bagofdragonite/32/2049_2.png) [@bagofdragonite](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/u/bagofdragonite)\ **Post date:** [May 2, 2018, 5:26am UTC](https://in-thread.sonic-pi.net/t/refresh-koshin-my-first-fully-finished-song/1041/6 "2018-05-02T05:26:29Z")
I like it better actually, I think it carries more intensity and could work for a more aggressive beat. I’ll keep this saved for possibly using at a later time.